Hidamari Sketch - Hiro's Hold-it Diet

[Serika]

Summary: Hiro learns of a new diet where she holds her pee to avoid feeling hungry. She tries it during a school day and doesn't plan it out very well.

Contents: Teenagers, FD, intentional holding, toilet use, wetting, embarrassment.

[Ranpalan]

Good writing.  You start in past tense but switch to present tense very quickly -- I'm not sure if this was intentional, but it sounds off to me.  Looking forward to more.

[Serika]

Thanks. I'll admit the first sentence sounds bad, but i just had to have the story begin with her doing that.

I can't remember where, but i have actually heard of this diet before. I must have followed a link from Female Desperation. :p