I know I said

[FallenStar]

... that I probably wouldn't work on another fanfic, but after a good long hiatus, I finally found a little inspiration and I've done a little fic (maybe even started a series, IDK  lol).


Here it is:  Enjoy!

Tags:  Does have Loli, so be careful! 

[Lisk]

Does have Loli, so be careful! 

I'm always careful with lolis ^^.

Anyway, a great story, I hope you will return to the world of fanfiction soon!

[animepee]

yeah, great story =p

i havent ever realy read any of your other fanfics but i agree with lisk ^^

[Serika]

If you're writing again this is a good fanfic to come back with. The characters were a little smart for their age, but the dialogue was perfect.

peepee pee that white stuff

[Sipplewat]

Whatever happened to the fic remakes you were doing?

[AliasnameTO]

I almost agreed with Serika, but then thought against it. I'm sure there are some very articulate six-year-olds who would talk like that. Whether or not the boy would be aroused by her, that is firmly in the realm of fiction. But it was an excellent story. I guess it was technically loli/shota, but the good kind where it's rooted in curiosity and newness, not the one where it's a young girl who's just as slutty as a pro.

Fantastic job, Star. And that's coming from a self-proclaimed very harsh writing critic. 

[Takergirl]

Very nice!! First piece I've read by ya but I love it so far...keep it up