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First story - Having cousins to stay

Started by mu3579, June 13, 2010, 06:10:17 PM

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Having Cousins to stay

Chapter 1 (Part 1)

One Friday afternoon, Izzy was getting increasingly excited, because she knew that her cousins would be arriving that evening and staying for a whole 3 weeks. Izzy didn't really like her cousin Max, who at 14 was three years older than her, but she loved getting to see her cousin Ellen. Izzy was so excited that she didn't even mind when her sister Anna spent all afternoon pestering her to play a card game. Anna was excited too: Anna was only 9, whereas Izzy was 11 and Ellen was 12, but she still liked it when Ellen came to stay.

Eventually it was time to go to the airport to meet Ellen and Max, so the girls' mum bundled them into the car.

"Anna, have you gone to the toilet? I don't want any problems in the car."

Anna blushed, embarrassed that her mum felt the need to make a point of checking if she'd peed; she hoped she wouldn't do that in front of her cousins. As they began the long drive to the airport, Izzy drifted off into daydreams, thinking about all the things they were going to do in the coming weeks. She hoped that Max wouldn't spoil their fun - he could be pretty mean sometimes, but hopefully he'd grown out of it in the year since they'd last seen their cousins.

The traffic was not too bad on the way to the airport, so the journey took only a little over an hour. They left the car and went to wait at the arrivals gate where their cousins would be emerging shortly. The wait was a little longer than they'd been expecting because the flight was slightly delayed, but before too long Izzy heard a shout:

"Izzy! Anna!" Ellen was running towards them, dragging her suitcase behind her. Her brother Max was following a few steps behind. "Hi, auntie Mary!"

Izzy's mum gave her niece a big hug. "How are you? How was the flight?"

"It was okay. We had to wait around for a while before we could get off the plane, but it was okay."

"Good, I'm glad it wasn't too bad. Hi Max! How are you?"

Izzy and Anna immediately started chatting to Ellen whilst their mum asked Max about the journey.

"Okay, does anybody need the toilet before we get in the car? We should probably be making our way back home."

"No thanks, Auntie Mary. We went on the plane just before we landed." Max answered for himself and his sister.

"Okay, great. Anna, perhaps you should come with me whilst I go. Izzy, if you don't need to then you can start showing Ellen and Max where the car is parked."

Anna blushed brightly at her mum taking her to the toilet like a little kid, but she did as she was told without making a fuss. Izzy and her cousins started to walk towards the car. Izzy was expecting that Ellen would be desperate to catch up on all her gossip and that they would spend the whole journey home chatting, but as they walked to the car she noticed that she was hanging back, whispering to her brother:

"Why did you tell her that I didn't need to go? You know that I was holding it the whole time we were waiting to get off the plane!"

Izzy suddenly noticed that her cousin was walking slightly weirdly. After each few steps, she would stop for a moment and press her legs together. By the time they got to the car, Ellen had stopped whispering to Max, but the three of them stood in awkward silence as they waited for Izzy's mum to get there. Izzy noticed that Ellen was tapping her feet a lot, and that every now and then she was pressing her hand up against her crotch. She looked nervous. It seemed to Izzy like Ellen had to pee, and she wondered if she should tell her mum, or if she should tell Ellen where the toilets were. But she was always very aware that she was a year younger than her cousin, and so she decided not to say anything, in case mentioning the toilet made her seem like a little kid. Soon Izzy's mum arrived, along with Anna, and they all got into the car.

In the car on the way home, Max was sitting in the front, and so Izzy and Ellen were next to each other in the back. To Izzy's relief, the awkward silence seemed to be over and they chatted happily about all the things that they had been up to in the past year. But although the atmosphere was now more friendly, Izzy could see that Ellen still seemed to be uncomfortable: she was squirming a lot, and was sitting with her thighs pressed tightly together; every now and then, her hand would linger on her lap, burying itself between her legs. Of course Izzy had seen other young girls desperate to pee before - including Anna lots of times - and in fact she'd seen Ellen urgently needing to pee once or twice too. But still, Izzy was surprised to see this girl whom she idolised as so grown-up and mature, squirming in her seat and apparently desperate to pee.

After they'd been travelling for about twenty minutes, the car slowed to a crawl as they entered heavy traffic. Ellen looked more and more nervous.

"Izzy", she whispered, "how much longer is it until your house?"

"Um, probably more than an hour still."

Ellen didn't look pleased at that news. By this point, she had her hand in her lap constantly, pressing down to hold herself firmly through her skirt, and she was sitting forward on the edge of her seat. Although she had been trying to be subtle about it before, she now seemed to be worried only about keeping control of her bladder.

"Auntie Mary?"

"Yes, darling."

"Um, I was sort of wondering if there's any way I could go to the toilet?"

Izzy's mum looked around at Ellen crossly. "Why didn't you go in the airport?" Max glanced at Ellen, but their aunt didn't notice. "I asked if anybody had to pee."

"I'm really sorry", Ellen replied quietly. "I didn't realised how badly I needed to go then."

"Well if there's a chance to stop then I'll let you. But you may have to hold it until we get home. I really shouldn't be having to make stops for a girl of your age to go pee."

Izzy felt sorry for her cousin, but she wasn't surprised. Her mum was always pretty strict about going to the toilet when you got the chance, and not having to make extra stops in the car.

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Sorry that it stops so suddenly - because it's my first story, I wanted to break this first installment into two bits, so that people can give me any tips or feedback now and I can make the end of this chapter as good as possible.

I hope everybody is liking it so far - but please let me know what you do or don't like!

animepee

It seems really good so far. I'm looking forward to the second part ^^

Ranpalan

This is looking good -- I'm not a big fan of that age group, but the way it gives more suggestions than actual information is nice to read. Only thing I can see that could be better is the point of view: it's jumping around somewhat, which makes it harder to imagine what's going on (for me, anyway). Looking forward to the next part.
Always happy to get PMs/IMs

gophergun

Quote from: animepee on June 18, 2010, 02:49:01 PM
Quote from: Seriy on June 15, 2010, 10:02:12 PM
This is looking good -- I'm not a big fan of that age group, but the way it gives more suggestions than actual information is nice to read. Only thing I can see that could be better is the point of view: it's jumping around somewhat, which makes it harder to imagine what's going on (for me, anyway). Looking forward to the next part.
I'm personally the opposite. I'm a big fan of that age group :p
Same here, quite easy to create a realistic scenario in that group. I definitely agree about the POV, though, it does get a bit confusing.

Yog-Sothoth

QuoteChuck Wurley: Finally, do you have any advice for our readers?

Jack Terricloth: "Yeah, sure. Try to be pleasant to each other, get out of the house in the evening, make time to read a good book now and then, depose your government when it suspends the free press, remember having fun is better for you than having money, oh and employ diplomatic means wherever possible to avoid violence." Rule number one of the cosmos is that "unlikely things do happen". Cheers, and thanks!

mu3579

I just wanted to say sorry for the delay! And that the next part is coming very soon...

r3

Quote from: mu3579 on June 28, 2010, 05:11:34 PM
I just wanted to say sorry for the delay! And that the next part is coming very soon...

That's good to hear - this is a great start to a story. As people have said, the age group and situation you're writing about is quite convincing, making it a really good idea.

mu3579

Sorry that I didn't post this before, but now here is the whole of Chapter 1 of Having Cousins to Stay.

Because it was so long ago, I've reposted part 1 from before and then written part 2 underneath it so that it's all one story.

If people like it, I'll post Chapter 2. (Without the big delay this time!)

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Having Cousins to stay

Chapter 1

One Friday afternoon, Izzy was getting increasingly excited, because she knew that her cousins would be arriving that evening and staying for a whole 3 weeks. Izzy didn't really like her cousin Max, who at 14 was three years older than her, but she loved getting to see her cousin Ellen. Izzy was so excited that she didn't even mind when her sister Anna spent all afternoon pestering her to play a card game. Anna was excited too: Anna was only 9, whereas Izzy was 11 and Ellen was 12, but she still liked it when Ellen came to stay.

Eventually it was time to go to the airport to meet Ellen and Max, so the girls' mum bundled them into the car.

"Anna, have you gone to the toilet? I don't want any problems in the car."

Anna blushed, embarrassed that her mum felt the need to make a point of checking if she'd peed; she hoped she wouldn't do that in front of her cousins. As they began the long drive to the airport, Izzy drifted off into daydreams, thinking about all the things they were going to do in the coming weeks. She hoped that Max wouldn't spoil their fun - he could be pretty mean sometimes, but hopefully he'd grown out of it in the year since they'd last seen their cousins.

The traffic was not too bad on the way to the airport, so the journey took only a little over an hour. They left the car and went to wait at the arrivals gate where their cousins would be emerging shortly. The wait was a little longer than they'd been expecting because the flight was slightly delayed, but before too long Izzy heard a shout:

"Izzy! Anna!" Ellen was running towards them, dragging her suitcase behind her. Her brother Max was following a few steps behind. "Hi, auntie Mary!"

Izzy's mum gave her niece a big hug. "How are you? How was the flight?"

"It was okay. We had to wait around for a while before we could get off the plane, but it was okay."

"Good, I'm glad it wasn't too bad. Hi Max! How are you?"

Izzy and Anna immediately started chatting to Ellen whilst their mum asked Max about the journey.

"Okay, does anybody need the toilet before we get in the car? We should probably be making our way back home."

"No thanks, Auntie Mary. We went on the plane just before we landed." Max answered for himself and his sister.

"Okay, great. Anna, perhaps you should come with me whilst I go. Izzy, if you don't need to then you can start showing Ellen and Max where the car is parked."

Anna blushed brightly at her mum taking her to the toilet like a little kid, but she did as she was told without making a fuss. Izzy and her cousins started to walk towards the car. Izzy was expecting that Ellen would be desperate to catch up on all her gossip and that they would spend the whole journey home chatting, but as they walked to the car she noticed that she was hanging back, whispering to her brother:

"Why did you tell her that I didn't need to go? You know that I was holding it the whole time we were waiting to get off the plane!"

Izzy suddenly noticed that her cousin was walking slightly weirdly. After each few steps, she would stop for a moment and press her legs together. By the time they got to the car, Ellen had stopped whispering to Max, but the three of them stood in awkward silence as they waited for Izzy's mum to get there. Izzy noticed that Ellen was tapping her feet a lot, and that every now and then she was pressing her hand up against her crotch. She looked nervous. It seemed to Izzy like Ellen had to pee, and she wondered if she should tell her mum, or if she should tell Ellen where the toilets were. But she was always very aware that she was a year younger than her cousin, and so she decided not to say anything, in case mentioning the toilet made her seem like a little kid. Soon Izzy's mum arrived, along with Anna, and they all got into the car.

In the car on the way home, Max was sitting in the front, and so Izzy and Ellen were next to each other in the back. To Izzy's relief, the awkward silence seemed to be over and they chatted happily about all the things that they had been up to in the past year. But although the atmosphere was now more friendly, Izzy could see that Ellen still seemed to be uncomfortable: she was squirming a lot, and was sitting with her thighs pressed tightly together; every now and then, her hand would linger on her lap, burying itself between her legs. Of course Izzy had seen other young girls desperate to pee before - including Anna lots of times - and in fact she'd seen Ellen urgently needing to pee once or twice too. But still, Izzy was surprised to see this girl whom she idolised as so grown-up and mature, squirming in her seat and apparently desperate to pee.

After they'd been travelling for about twenty minutes, the car slowed to a crawl as they entered heavy traffic. Ellen looked more and more nervous.

"Izzy", she whispered, "how much longer is it until your house?"

"Um, probably more than an hour still."

Ellen didn't look pleased at that news. By this point, she had her hand in her lap constantly, pressing down to hold herself firmly through her skirt, and she was sitting forward on the edge of her seat. Although she had been trying to be subtle about it before, she now seemed to be worried only about keeping control of her bladder.

"Auntie Mary?"

"Yes, darling."

"Um, I was sort of wondering if there's any way I could go to the toilet?"

Izzy's mum looked around at Ellen crossly. "Why didn't you go in the airport?" Max glanced at Ellen, but their aunt didn't notice. "I asked if anybody had to pee."

"I'm really sorry", Ellen replied quietly. "I didn't realise how badly I needed to go then."

"Well if there's a chance to stop then I'll let you. But you may have to hold it until we get home. I really shouldn't be having to make stops for a girl of your age to go pee."

Izzy felt sorry for her cousin, but she wasn't surprised. Her mum was always pretty strict about going to the toilet when you got the chance, and not having to make extra stops in the car. She and Anna had both got in trouble with that rule in the past.

The car continued to crawl forwards in the traffic, and Izzy watched in amazement as her cousin got clearly more and more bursting to pee. For Izzy, at 11 years old, it was an embarrassing secret if she still ever got so desperate to pee that she couldn't hide it. And yet now her 12 year old cousin was clearly totally bursting, and in front of an adult as well!

Izzy couldn't help feeling sorry for Ellen as she went very pale and started to chew her lip nervously. She was squirming non-stop in her seat now, and had both her hands grabbing herself tightly through her skirt. And then, clearly unable to hold it like she was anymore, she suddenly pushed up her skirt to reveal her pink panties and grabbed her cunny. Izzy was stunned that her cousin was exposing herself like this in the car, and realised that she really was on the verge of wetting herself. It was at that moment that Ellen spoke again, in a panicked voice:

"Um, Auntie Mary, please can we stop? I don't think I can hold it much longer!"

Izzy's mum looked over her shoulder, and saw her young niece desperately pressing her hands into the crotch of her panties. "Ellen, what are you doing?! That's not acceptable behaviour! Stop touching yourself like that!"

Ellen was almost in tears. "I'm sorry, I can't, I really need to pee!"

Recognising the note of desperation in Ellen's voice, Izzy's mum softened her attitude and tried to think of a place to stop. "Well do whatever you need to hold it, but it will be at least 15 minutes before there's a place where I can pull over. You had better not dirty my car, young lady!"

By the look on her face, Izzy didn't think that her cousin was going to be able to hold it for 15 minutes. She still couldn't believe that this was happening. Surely Ellen wouldn't actually wet herself? Sure, Anna still had the occasional accident. But she was only 9 - and she got in so much trouble when she even came close to wetting her panties. And okay, Izzy herself had...well, she didn't like to think about that. But surely Ellen wouldn't wet herself?

Suddenly it occurred to Izzy that if Ellen did have an accident, she might just have to fly straight home. She had been looking forward to her cousin coming to stay for so long, she couldn't bear it if she didn't stay now. Izzy noticed that Max was looking round the whole time, watching his sister's discomfort and smirking. He's still pretty mean then, she thought to herself.

A few more minutes went by, and Ellen was no longer looking so pale. She was blushing bright red as she squirmed desperately in her seat. Izzy noticed Ellen now had one of her hands holding herself inside her panties, and she was pretty sure she could see a small dark spot on the crotch of the pink material. Suddenly Ellen gasped, and that small wet spot grew rapidly. She put her second hand inside her panties in a desperate last attempt to hold back the flood, but there was nothing more she could do as the pee poured out from between her legs.

"Oh no...oh no, I'm so sorry Auntie Mary!" Ellen began to cry as the flood of pee soaked her panties and started to run down her legs. Pee started to drip down into the footwell and a puddle formed around her on the seat of the car. She stared in shame as her aunt looked round to see the mess that was forming in her car.

"Oh Ellen. I'm so disappointed in you. You're far too old to be embarrassing yourself like this. You can be sure that I'll be calling your parents as soon as we're home. What have you got to say for yourself?"

Ellen couldn't bring herself to look up. "I'm sorry Auntie Mary, I just couldn't hold it any longer!"

"Well then I can see I'm going to have to remember to make sure you've been to the toilet before we get in the car for the next 3 weeks! If you're going to act like such a little kid, I'll have to treat you like one!"

"Yes Auntie..." Ellen mumbled, almost inaudibly.

With a sigh, Izzy's mum went quiet and carried on driving, leaving ellen to sit silently in her puddle for the last half hour of the journey. Izzy felt so sorry for her cousin, and wanted to say something, but she had no idea what to say. She noticed that Max was still smirking at what had happened to his sister. Anna was probably quite pleased too, Izzy thought, hearing that her cousin (who was three years older than her) was going to be getting the same embarrassing reminders to go pee that she always got from her mum.

Almost nothing was said for the rest of the journey until they arrived home. Izzy's mum parked the car and got out.

"Wait here Ellen - I'm going to get you a towel."

As soon as she was gone, Ellen hissed at her older brother. "Why did you tell her at the airport that we'd both just used the toilet? You knew I had to pee! I hate you so much!"

"It's not my fault", Max taunted her. "I thought a 12 year old would be able to hold it until she got home! I guess you're going to have a fun few weeks here, since we've been here two hours and you're already in trouble!"

Ellen just glared and got out of the car. Izzy got out too. She didn't know if what Ellen had said was true, but if it was then Max really hadn't grown out of his meanness. If anything, he'd got worse.

Izzy's mum came back and took the towel round to where Ellen was standing.

"Hold up your skirt."

Ellen did as she was told and lifted up her skirt to reveal her soaked panties and thighs streaked with pee. She flinched with obvious embarrassment as her aunt took the hem of her soaked underwear and pulled them down to her feet. Ellen stepped out of the wet clothes and her aunt wrapped the towel around her waist.

"Right, go upstairs and have a shower, then come back down and maybe we'll start your holiday again."

mu3579

No comments yet since I posted the whole of Chapter 1, but hopefully people like it.

Here's Chapter 2!

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Having Cousins to Stay - Chapter 2

After her humiliating accident in the car home from the airport, Ellen was very quiet for a lot of the day, in particular saying almost nothing to her brother at any point. But slowly as the afternoon went by she started to forget what had happened and became the fun, chatty cousin that Izzy knew.

Izzy and Ellen had spent the day mostly watching TV, and sometimes playing with Anna. But as Ellen started to get more talkative they spent some time just catching up, talking about boys and school and plans for the summer. When Izzy's Dad came home from work and said Hello to Ellen and Max, Izzy could sense Ellen's relief that nobody said anything about her accident. By the time they all had to sit down for dinner, it was starting to feel like the awkwardness from before had gone and that Izzy and Ellen could have the summer together that they'd been looking forward to.

While they were eating the meal, Izzy's mum explained to Max and Ellen what the sleeping arrangements were:

"You are all squeezed into one room unfortunately, but you two do at least have a single bed each. Izzy and Anna will share the double."

Izzy sighed loudly - this was something she'd been arguing about with her mum for weeks. "Do I have to, mum? Ellen and Max are here for 3 weeks and you know Anna's going to wet her bed at least once in that time! Why doesn't she have one of the single beds and I can just share the double with Ellen."

Anna flushed bright red with embarrassment. "I will not! Anyway you still sometimes..."

"Be quiet, both of you!" Their mum silenced them angrily. "Izzy, we've already discussed this. I'm not making your cousins have to share beds while they're staying here. And anyway, Anna, you're going to be a good girl, act your age and make sure we don't have any more problems - aren't you?"

Anna blushed even brighter red and stared at the table, mumbling "Yes mum".

After dinner, all four kids sat down on the sofa to watch a movie. They were all enjoying it, but Anna was particularly wrapped up, and after a little while Izzy noticed that her little sister was obviously ignoring a full bladder in order to keep watching. She was sat with one foot curled up underneath her, constantly bouncing up and down on her heel in that tell-tale sign of a little girl who needs to pee. Izzy couldn't believe how often her sister did this - she'd had her fair share of accidents as a little girl herself, but they were normally because she was too shy to give any indication that she needed the toilet, and she certainly wouldn't let herself get obviously more and more desperate when she could just go to the bathroom at any time, like Anna did.

Izzy thought about sharing a joke with Ellen about what Anna was doing, but then she thought that her cousin might not be in the mood for jokes about having to pee today after what had happened in the car. She kept watching the film, but also kept half an eye on her sister - noticing that she was now occasionally grabbing her crotch through her skirt. The only time she stopped squirming and grabbing herself was when either of their parents came into the room: Anna knew very well that they'd be mad with her if they realised she was putting off going to the toilet again.

When there wasn't too long to go in the film, Izzy's mum came in. "I'm about to go and run the bath for bathtime. Girls, if you come up after the film for your bath. Max - I'm sure you're old enough now that you can take care of your own bath, so you can have the bathroom to yourself once I'm done with the girls." Max smiled. "Anna, do you need to use the toilet before I start running the bath?"

Anna was only half listening to what her mum was saying, with most of her attention on the TV screen. "No, I'm okay mum."

"Are you absolutely sure?"

"Yes!" Anna replied impatiently, not liking that her mum was singling her out like this in front of her older cousins. Izzy could tell that Anna was only just managing to resist the urge to squirm desperately while their mum was in the room. As soon as she went to start filling the bath, Anna was burying her hand between her legs again as she tried to hold on until the end of the film.

The film came to an end and the girls started to get up and go to get ready for their bath. As soon as she stood up, Anna immediately crossed her legs tightly around one of her hands, squirming desperately on the spot. As they all got undressed in their bedroom, Izzy and Ellen chatted about the film, not paying too much attention to Anna who was struggling a little to peel off her clothes with one hand buried permanently in her crotch. Eventually she got her panties off, and still grabbing herself she hurried into the bathroom.

When she got into the bathroom, she tried for a moment to maintain the deception for her mum, letting go of her crotch and trying to stand still, but she was just too desperate and she couldn't resist the urge to tightly cross her legs and squirm on the spot.

Her mum was immediately angry. "Anna, what are you doing?"

"I'm, I'm sorry...I just..."

"I asked you just a few minutes ago if you needed to use the toilet and you said no."

"I'm sorry, I didn't realise how badly I had to go." Anna danced desperately in front of her mum, trying her hardest to resist the temptation to grab between her legs because she knew that would get her in even more trouble.

"You're 9 years old Anna, you're not a baby. I shouldn't be having to tell you to go to the toilet, you should be able to keep your panties dry on your own."

"I know mum, I'm sorry." Anna was so embarrassed to be having this conversation again, especially knowing that her sister and her cousin had now come into the room too, ready for their baths. "Please can I just go to the toilet quickly before my bath - I promise I won't put it off next time."

"No, you know the rules. I'm going to give you your bath, and Ellen and Izzy will have theirs, and then you can use the toilet once nobody else is using the bathroom anymore."

Izzy felt pretty sorry for her sister. Their parents rules were very clear that you didn't use the toilet while somebody else was using the bathroom, but that didn't make it any easier for Anna right now.

Their mum lifted Anna into the bath and started to wash her as quickly as she could. Anna squirmed desperately, trying to keep her legs pressed tightly together, but constantly getting told to sit still or to open her legs so that her mum could wash her properly. Finally it was done, and she got back out of the bath and took a towel from the rack. Immediately she buried both hands in her crotch, pretending that she was just wrapping the towel around herself. Even grabbing herself tightly, she couldn't stand still and she pleaded to be allowed to use the toilet: "Please mum, can I just pee quickly before Izzy and Ellen have their bath?"

"No Anna, you have to learn to act your age. Dry yourself off, and then go put your nightie on. It will only be a few more minutes and then you can use the toilet."

Anna continued to grab herself tightly through the towel, half-heartedly drying herself like she'd been told to, and dancing desperately on the spot. Izzy and Ellen both wanted to help her out, so they washed themselves as quickly as they could. As Izzy was finishing off in the bath, Anna dropped the towel and hurried back to the bedroom to get her nightie. When Izzy and Ellen were both done, they went back to the bedroom as well and found Anna rooted to the spot, her nightie pushed up and both hands desperately gripping her crotch. A tiny streak of pee was trickling down her thigh.

Izzy immediately felt a pang of sympathy for her little sister. "Come on Anna, we're finished in the bathroom, you can go pee now."

"I don't know if I can make it" she replied quietly, with tears in her eyes.

"You'll be okay, just hurry in there now before you leak anymore."

Giving her legs one final squeeze together, Anna hurried out the door just in time to see Max going into the bathroom. "Nooo! Max, please I need to use the bathroom quickly! Please I can't wait!"

Max closed the door and locked it. "Sorry, I'm taking my shower now, you'll have to wait until I'm done." From inside the bathroom came the sound of the shower running.

"Noo, that's not fair!" Anna started crying, with another trickle of pee leaking out past her hands. Dancing outside the bathroom door, she crossed her legs as tightly as she could over her hands in a final effort to hold back the flood. She knew how much trouble she'd be in if she peed, but she had to go so bad, and she couldn't block out the sound of the shower pouring down in the bathroom. She felt a bigger spurt escape from between her legs, tickling the back of her thighs. She tried to squeeze herself even tighter, but she couldn't hold it anymore and her bladder suddenly gave way. A flood of pee poured out past her hands, going from a trickle between her thighs to a torrent in moments. She closed her eyes in horror as that familiar warm, wet feeling ran down her legs to the floor, puddling at her feet.

Eventually the pee stopped, and Anna looked down at the mess on the floor. The puddle seemed huge. She tried to think what she should do now, but she knew she didn't have a choice. Trembling, she knocked on her parents' door: "Um, mum, I'm sorry...I couldn't make it."

Her mum came out and took one look at the 9 year old's ashamed face and glistening thighs, and the pool outside the bathroom door. "Oh Anna, I'm so disappointed in you. When are you going to start acting your age?"

Anna couldn't hold back her tears. "I'm sorry mum, I almost held it, but then Max went in for his shower and I couldn't wait any longer..."

Izzy and Ellen had both come out of the bedroom to see what was going on. "You two get to bed, I'm going to have to give Anna another bath once Max is done in the shower."

"Okay mum." Suddenly, Izzy had a thought. "If Anna's coming to bed later when she's had another bath, should I share the double bed with Ellen for now?" She was slightly worried that her mum would think she was just arguing again, but it really did make sense.

"Yes, fine. You two just go to bed and I'll deal with your sister."

KittenKitten

Great story! I really like it and I hope you keep writing more! :)