April in Wetterland (teen loli, pee, scat)

[captainjack]

So it has been quite a long time since I posted a story up on here (over a year I think!) So I thought I was about due for one. It's too long for me to bother to paste and then reformat so I hope nobody minds that I'm simply going to attach it as a Word Document. I think its easier to read anyhow though not as many people will bother to download I imagine.

Anyways, its an original piece about a High School freshmen girl who winds up in a strange place with a strange situation. There is desperation, wetting, and some some panty pooping near the end.

Hope somebody enjoys it anyway! 


wow all those downloads and not one comment?
would love some constructive criticism for next time! thanks :)

[FallenStar]

Based on my own personal experiences, I can give you three reasons why people might not choose to review your work:

1. It's in .doc file format and 'round these parts, that's akin to anathema to get people to download and open it.

2. It's an uploaded file - that, in itself, makes it less likely that anyone would open it but isn't too big a barrier (or shouldn't be, anyway) to people viewing it.

3. It has panty-pooping - Not that we don't have a fair amount of poop-lovers here, but it would probably make it less likely for some people to view it.


As much as I hate to say it, it seems people only care about stories uploaded in posts. I wish it weren't so as I hate the idea of posting stories like regular posts, but...