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The Prodigal Princess (Pt. 4, Brainstorm!)

Started by Sarrim, November 01, 2008, 05:34:15 PM

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Sarrim

Hey there. So I'm going to get to work on part four of my series, but I thought I would solicit some feedback from readers. What sorts of things would you like to see in the new chapter? More desperation? More princess? Something else? I have my own ideas, but I figured I'd offer a chance for people to request something.

Firescyth

Princess is the main role here, even more than Samantha, so she should be there, with much more desperation, when, er...she's in some ceremony or something.

And put some vomting or something in this. I know, it's not realated, but it will be good.

I'm waiting to read this chapter. Please post it soon. :clap:

Sipplewat

More desp, less intentional. More period drama too, it's really interesting.

Serika

I liked how Samantha humiliated herself in front of the queen last chapter. It would be nice if the Queen doesn't simply forget that it happened. Other than this, your own ideas should do well. :)

Quote from: SarrimMore desperation?
Yes.
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Toasty

I think the queen is an interesting new character, and you should definitely explore some stuff with her, but also feature alot of Amelie.

Also, I know it's your story, but if you could, no incest...please?

Finally, anything involving more poop accidents gets a big thumbs up from me.

Alright, have at it and good luck!

Firescyth

Oooh, it's been ages since you asked us for ideas. Aren't you going to post the story? :crying: