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Creative Writing => Fiction => Topic started by: FallenStar on May 23, 2009, 02:13:21 PM

Title: I wrote this, yes I did =P
Post by: FallenStar on May 23, 2009, 02:13:21 PM
I wrote this fic for a Nyou Fiction story contest but for those of you who aren't members there, I've decided to post it here as well.

Take a gander and lemme know how you like/dislike it. 
Title: Re: I wrote this, yes I did =P
Post by: Serika on May 23, 2009, 05:49:37 PM
I came. :drool:

No, but seriously, i liked it. All the elements (FD, Hypno, FE) were done well from the start of class to the end. Also, the atmosphere was good enough to make my stuff look like a daytime TV script. :)