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Creative Writing => Fiction => Topic started by: Ranpalan on November 21, 2009, 08:33:02 AM

Title: For Packrat [Female Desperation, Teen] [Deleted]
Post by: Ranpalan on November 21, 2009, 08:33:02 AM
Due to policy changes on AGD, I have removed my works.
Title: Re: For Packrat [Female Desperation, Teen]
Post by: packrat on November 21, 2009, 03:41:52 PM
Seriy, you are a GOD.  Thank you sooooo much!  I never thought anyone would do this story!

Thank you Seriy!  XD
Title: Re: For Packrat [Female Desperation, Teen]
Post by: Ranpalan on November 25, 2009, 10:36:07 AM
You're  very welcome! :D

Anyone else have plot ideas?
Title: Re: For Packrat [Female Desperation, Teen]
Post by: thunder7102 on February 05, 2010, 09:16:22 PM
O.O There is not much to say here than the fact that THAT WAS AMAZING. As far as a little constructive criticism, might I suggest adding a little bit more detail during the bus trip to describe more desperation? Even without it, 10/10.
Title: Re: For Packrat [Female Desperation, Teen]
Post by: Omorashi-lover on February 06, 2010, 05:31:11 AM
Oh great this is amazing! I love your story XD!
Title: Re: For Packrat [Female Desperation, Teen]
Post by: Ranpalan on February 06, 2010, 05:32:14 AM
o.o Thank you? :blushing:

This was my style after reading Poe... I'm currently working through Sartre's Nausea, I'm curious how a fanfiction would turn out, so plot suggestions are welcome.
Title: Re: For Packrat [Female Desperation, Teen]
Post by: Omorashi-lover on February 06, 2010, 05:34:54 AM
Hmmm I have no idea right now, but I think it's always better to plot for your own story =D
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