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Creative Writing => Fiction => Topic started by: JackO on September 07, 2009, 07:44:26 AM

Poll
Question: Any preferences as to the situation?
Option 1: High School Classroom
Option 2: Girls Night Out
Option 3: Younger School Girls
Option 4: Some sort of trip
Option 5: Other, please tell me in your message.
Title: My first fanfic.
Post by: JackO on September 07, 2009, 07:44:26 AM
So, I'm going to write my first fanfic soon, but I'm not sure what to write it on. So I thought I'd gauge the demand for the different types of story I could write.

So, choose a poll option, and tell me why you'd like it.

Sorry if this is in the wrong section, but I don't think it is...:/
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: AliasnameTO on September 07, 2009, 12:08:08 PM
I voted trip.

A good scenario I think would be a high school-age girl who was going on a trip somewhere that was far away, so the bus has to leave the school at like 5 a.m. She wakes up a little late and in a rush to get out the door, she forgets to pee. Already needing to go a little bit, she gets to the bus, and waits for another two hours or so on the ride. Predictably (in a story like this at least), they'd hit just enough traffic to keep them from taking a comfort break, so they have to go right into whatever activity it is, such as a museum or historical reenactment or something. By the end of that, she's out of her mind with desperation, and right before she gets to a bathroom she loses it. Although she's distraught by this, she's comforted by her best friend, and notices that a few other people are rushing to the bathroom and doesn't feel so bad afterwards. You could also add a section after that describing how when she's at home, she remembers how it feels and rubs herself off.
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: JackO on September 07, 2009, 12:56:08 PM
Also thanks to whoever moved this to fanfiction, I didn't know if something that wasn't actually a fanfic should be in this section.
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: FallenStar on September 07, 2009, 01:18:01 PM
That would be me.  Anything fanfiction related goes in here, be it a story or questions about stories.   :gunsmilie:
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: countryease on September 08, 2009, 02:25:48 PM
Wow, only 4 votes so far...  I voted for Girls Night Out, mainly because that gives a great opportunity for maybe some drunkenness with multiple girls getting desperate.  But hey, that's just me, anything you want to write will be greatly appreciated.
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: JackO on September 09, 2009, 10:35:46 AM
First Option to reach 3 votes will be the subject I write about, cos I wanna start soon :P
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: TiaMaria on September 09, 2009, 03:07:09 PM
Looks like it's going to be younger school girls then, mate.
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: AliasnameTO on September 10, 2009, 01:03:32 AM
It's hard to write about younger schoolgirls though (younger meaning elementary age, ca. 5-10 years) because they talk and act so differently than adults. Unless you've got a lot of experience talking to them and being around them, writing a young girl's wetting story is a tall order.
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: JackO on September 10, 2009, 11:02:36 AM
Its a challenge i'll have to take.

I might aim it at 10-ish, cos anything less might be cute, but I've not been around that age kids for a while.

Might take a while, cos I have to do a biology presentation, and try get my head around some Physics and Maths :P
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: triforce1996 on September 29, 2009, 12:26:44 AM
I chose Younger School Girls cos I like lolis wetting themselves.
Title: Re: My first fanfic.
Post by: JackO on September 29, 2009, 07:29:50 AM
Quote from: triforce1996 on September 29, 2009, 12:26:44 AM
I chose Younger School Girls cos I like lolis wetting themselves.

Well maybe you should read the actual fanfic, which has been posted now...because its about 11ish y/o girls....

I mean seriously do people actually look at the shouts, where i annouced that I had finished and posted it, or the new unread topics, or just generally look?

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