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Creative Writing => Fiction => Topic started by: anime lover on November 25, 2008, 07:28:33 PM

Title: 'WWBC' original fic [LOLI] [WS] [BONDANGE]
Post by: anime lover on November 25, 2008, 07:28:33 PM
Training for the WWBC seems to involve some very strange things, but what happens when a mother is truly driven to make her daughter the best she can be?
Title: Re: 'WWBC' original fic [LOLI] [WS] [BONDANGE]
Post by: Serika on November 28, 2008, 08:00:19 PM
Great concept for training. Adding a few more exercises, like timed holding at 90% full would be neat, but i like how she can just be "refilled" right away. :)
Title: Re: 'WWBC' original fic [LOLI] [WS] [BONDANGE]
Post by: someguy on November 29, 2008, 02:37:35 AM
nice story a bit of a longer desperation might be nice bit otherwise great.