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Creative Writing => Fiction => Topic started by: Sarrim on November 01, 2008, 05:34:15 PM

Title: The Prodigal Princess (Pt. 4, Brainstorm!)
Post by: Sarrim on November 01, 2008, 05:34:15 PM
Hey there. So I'm going to get to work on part four of my series, but I thought I would solicit some feedback from readers. What sorts of things would you like to see in the new chapter? More desperation? More princess? Something else? I have my own ideas, but I figured I'd offer a chance for people to request something.
Title: Re: The Prodigal Princess (Pt. 4, Brainstorm!)
Post by: Firescyth on November 04, 2008, 08:47:39 AM
Princess is the main role here, even more than Samantha, so she should be there, with much more desperation, when, er...she's in some ceremony or something.

And put some vomting or something in this. I know, it's not realated, but it will be good.

I'm waiting to read this chapter. Please post it soon. :clap:
Title: Re: The Prodigal Princess (Pt. 4, Brainstorm!)
Post by: Sipplewat on November 04, 2008, 06:33:44 PM
More desp, less intentional. More period drama too, it's really interesting.
Title: Re: The Prodigal Princess (Pt. 4, Brainstorm!)
Post by: Serika on November 04, 2008, 07:26:39 PM
I liked how Samantha humiliated herself in front of the queen last chapter. It would be nice if the Queen doesn't simply forget that it happened. Other than this, your own ideas should do well. :)

Quote from: SarrimMore desperation?
Yes.
Title: Re: The Prodigal Princess (Pt. 4, Brainstorm!)
Post by: Toasty on February 11, 2009, 04:58:58 PM
I think the queen is an interesting new character, and you should definitely explore some stuff with her, but also feature alot of Amelie.

Also, I know it's your story, but if you could, no incest...please?

Finally, anything involving more poop accidents gets a big thumbs up from me.

Alright, have at it and good luck!
Title: Re: The Prodigal Princess (Pt. 4, Brainstorm!)
Post by: Firescyth on March 31, 2009, 07:51:26 AM
Oooh, it's been ages since you asked us for ideas. Aren't you going to post the story? :crying: