Performance Anxiety (A Macross/Robotech fic) (Peeing, Desperation)

[r3]

Some people said I should write a story about two girls in a car. I decided a Macross fic would be fun to write.

I combined the two, and this is the result. I hope you enjoy it, it was good fun to write. And if the original names irk you, Ctrl-F is your friend (for reference, you'd be wanting Max and Miriya Sterling, and Lisa Hayes.)

EDIT: Thanks for reminding me - I forgot to attach the file!

[WeAreTheFinale]

Soooo......Where is this fanfic?

EDIT:

Nevermind. Found it in the downloads section.
Ehhh...Decent, but overall wasn't that great. I feel that it lacks more detail on their desperation. Sorry. Nice try, though.

[animepee]

it wasn't that bad, but i think it was a little to short. you should use more detail

[r3]

From these comments, it seems I can easily improve this.

Expect a better version in the near future, everyone.

[WeAreTheFinale]

Aight. I'll look foward to it. Let us know when it's done.