Lately I've been writing some smut, and I haven't really had a place to post it. I asked Star and he and the other admins agreed that it'd be okay to post stories about males here as long as it was tagged as such. So if you enjoy it, feel free to read it!
These are stories about my original characters, Shiro and Mamoru. Shiro is nineteen years old, average build, with red hair. He swears too much, is often combative and stubborn, but very much in love with Mamoru. Mamoru is twenty-five with a slightly muscular build and has dyed blue hair. He's carefree yet nurturing and somewhat of a hornball. He's never bothered by anything Shiro says because he knows he never means it. Mamoru enjoys pee play and is trying to get his very pee-shy partner into it. Here are their trials and errors in pee play.
Feel free to critique my writing - I always want to get better at it!
There are always more stories to come, and they are posted in chronological order. Also, if you have a suggestion for a story between these two, feel free to mention it! I may just use it!
Story synopses:
Morning Habits - Shiro has to use the bathroom in the early morning, but soon realizes he has a spectator... [Desperation, WS, male/male sex]
Responsibility - A skipped bathroom break has Shiro bursting for relief on his walk home. Spoiler: He doesn't make it. [Desperation, wetting, WS, male/male oral]
Attire - Mamoru comes home with several gifts for Shiro... which double as gifts for him. [Male/male oral, crossdressing, vibrator play, wetting]
Insomnia - Shiro, for several reasons, can't get to sleep. Perhaps Mamoru can help... [M/M sex, crossdressing, teasing, desperation/full bladder sex, wetting]
Indulgence - After a tickling accident, Shiro and Mamoru head to the beach for even more wet fun. [Desp, tickling, wetting, male/male frottage, WS]
Deception - Mamoru takes out a cross-dressed Shiro out for a shopping trip. Shiro gets desperate, but can't decide which bathroom to use... [Desp, x-dress, wetting, WS, male/male sex]
Malaise - Shiro, sick and bedridden, must endure the indignity of having Mamoru take care of his every need. EVERY need. [Desp, WS, bedwetting]
Isolation - Mamoru decides to rid Shiro of his pee shyness once and for all on a camping trip, where the two are utterly alone. [Desp, WS, m/m sex, masturbation]
Control - Now back home, Shiro can indulge in his own fantasies. [Light bondage/discipline, spanking, bladder pressing, desp, wetting, WS, m/m sex]
Upcoming:
Inebriation - A night of drunken exploits leads to some very naughty fun in a public restroom. [Desp, WS, TBA]
Empathy - A day at the races leaves both of the boys extremely desperate. If only Shiro were able to enjoy the irony. [Desp, wetting, TBA]
Just finished. Your writing style is very good, i have no complaints there.
Morning Habits was deliciously cruel. So close yet so far with someone else watching. I also laughed at what Shiro was about to ask at the end. Loved the beginning of Responsibility and how you explained him getting into that situation.
I'll admit i usually only read M/M if one of the guys is wearing a skirt, but i enjoyed this anyway. Good work. :)
Well I gotta tell you, I love men in skirts, too. Maybe that could be worked into the next story! Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed them.
Very well written, though I'm not into m/m. But your writing style is wonderful, I bet plenty of women (and certain guys) would love these!
Third story added: Attire. Serika, I think you'll like this one!
Quote from: DubiousCharms on July 23, 2009, 11:54:04 PM
Third story added: Attire. Serika, I think you'll like this one!
Indeed i would! Lucky Shiro, getting to finish like that.
Great chapter, DC. :clap:
I'm glad y'all are enjoying these! New story added - Insomnia. A little shorter than the others, but it's not short on the kink! I expect this will appeal to both Serika and Ella!
these are really good.
I don't normally read M/M fiction, wetting or otherwise...but since everybody else heaped praise on them, I decided to try it. And man was I suprised.
The stories were good, really good. I personally thought that the second one was the best. They flowed really well, and the characters are greatly developed as well. Keep up the good work!
im glad to see that there's now a possibility for M/M stories. that's something i find quite nice.
and these are awesome!!! i dont think i've read something this good in quite some time! 'grats!
I just read the story Morning Habits and it is great. Good story! I'll have to read the rest later!
Keep up the good work!
Ok I just read all four, and all I have to say is FANTASTIC!!!!!!!
I loved the part where Shiro was wearing the skirt!!
Well I'm glad everyone is enjoying these! But I do need a little help with the next one. I'm having trouble thinking up a plot!
My only idea so far is Shiro and Mamoru taking a little trip to the beach with sexy and wet results. I'm wondering if anyone has a story they'd like to see. The themes should be similar to the ones I've already covered but I'm also okay with light bondage/discipline, tickling, stuff like that - you can ask if I'm willing to go with another kink of yours and I'll answer.
Tell me your fantasies, everyone, and I may just put them to print!
Quote from: DubiousCharms on September 07, 2009, 07:55:54 PM
tickling, stuff like that
99.95% chance i'll read and review if there's a tickle wetting.
Fifth story just finished and added - Indulgence! Enjoy!
Nice Dubious! I can't wait until the 6th part, Deception, comes out.
Hehe, Mamoru is so mean. Mean in a good way, i liked it. :)
QuoteHe changed his position on the couch, jamming his foot under his crotch,
Does this work with guys too? I've only ever heard of females doing this.
Quote from: Serika on September 18, 2009, 11:12:48 PM
QuoteHe changed his position on the couch, jamming his foot under his crotch,
Does this work with guys too? I've only ever heard of females doing this.
Well it can to a small extent, if you get it in the right position, but it's easier to just hold the crotch area.
Yeah, I thought the same logic applied to guys. Besides, he couldn't hold it with his hands since he was playing that video game!
The next story, Deception, has been added after a long absence! Enjoy!
Holy crap, I'm on a roll! Seventh chapter, Malaise, has been added! :clap:
You've been quite productive lately. That gives us plenty to read over the weekend. :)
Quote"That happened to me once. Ended up peeing in my friend Jeremy's closet."
Why was Mamoru sleeping in his friend's closet? Or does he mean he was sleepwalking? :lol:
Sleepwalking of course! You wouldn't believe the stories I've heard of people half-waking up to use the bathroom, only to mistake somewhere ELSE for the bathroom. :lol:
Good work DubiousCharms! Good stories...and 2 releases this time. Thanks~!
Quote from: DubiousCharms on November 14, 2009, 07:46:06 PM
Sleepwalking of course! You wouldn't believe the stories I've heard of people half-waking up to use the bathroom, only to mistake somewhere ELSE for the bathroom. :lol:
I heard about this too! A guy mistake a closet for the bathroom :lol: his mother was ANGRY the following day :lol:
BTW I only read the three first but I'm really anjoying the story. Go with it :clap:
Chapter 8, Isolation, has been posted! Lighter on the sex and heavier on the WS - I hope you all enjoy it!
was fantastic DC love this story
I can't wait for the next chapter
Isolation was great. I can't wait for the next one.
Man I wish I was in Shiro's position.
Nice holding in isolation. Mamoru is SO dense too. xD
I guess my gf's fetishes are rubbing off on me well anyway your stories are fantastic, very well written perfect balance between story and fetish material in my opinion, you are a very talented writer.
New chapter posted! By the way, I'm still looking for suggestions. I already have a chapter in mind, but it's always nice to have at least two ideas in case one isn't working out at any given moment.
Another fabulous chapter. As for ideas, I can't think of any. I think you covered all of my fetishes.
Well suggestions don't have to just be about fetishes - you could easily suggest a story or a situation!
this last chapter was fantastic i really like it, one of your best ^^
i think the next will be fantastic too, keep with it! :clap:
I was just recently thinking about a situation. Since the SuperBowl is this weekend and the Daytona 500 is next weekend, I was thinking, why not have Shiro and Mamoru in a sports stadium, either a small local stadium for a local Jr league game or a big one like the NFL or a MLB stadiums.
If anyone other than me likes the Daytona 500 on this site, it'd shock the hell out of me. O.o;
Quote from: FallenStar on February 05, 2010, 07:51:35 PM
If anyone other than me likes the Daytona 500 on this site, it'd shock the hell out of me. O.o;
A bit out of topic, but you are now completely shocked.
Just Wondering... are you planning to continue this story??? I really like it
Sorry, Akemi... DubiousCharms is not a member of this site anymore. She left a while back. :S
For those of you who haven't yet heard, I'll be popping in every now and then from now on! Therefore I'm going to be working on the next chapter of this story pretty soon. Be on the lookout, people!