'Lost Relief' a Brandy and Mr. Whiskers fic [WATERSPORTS]

[anime lover]

my first non-popgirl fic! lol

Heh, feels pretty weird doing a short fetish fic again when all my previous works have been over ten pages (sometimes reaching over twenty), kinda feels like somethings missing ^_^

anyway...

Brandy get's lost on her way home while nature calls, and if that wasn't bad enough, Whiskers is with her...

[Magic Kitty]

Interesting! I was surprised to see a Brandy and Mr. Whiskers fic here. I used to love that show.
You did a good job on it. The grammar and descriptions were great. Haha, I almost thought Mr. Whiskers was going to see her xD I wonder how he would have reacted?

-It was a little awkward when you mentioned "lips" though since she's a doggy. But maybe I'm just not used to furries...
-I don't think it's a "watersports" fic though. Just wetting/peeing.

That said....might you make moar?

[anime lover]

thanks for commenting, I'm glad you liked it.
I think Brandy's really cute too ^_^