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Creative Writing => Fiction => Topic started by: anime lover on September 04, 2011, 11:00:01 AM

Title: 'Backseat Bursting: Pass the Toilet' original [LOLI][WATERSPORTS]
Post by: anime lover on September 04, 2011, 11:00:01 AM
another one-shot fic from me ^_^
this time, it's a response to a challenge on Nyou Fiction again

An unfortunate group of girls, desperate to pee and nowhere to go, find that their only source of relief is... 'unconventional'.
Title: Re: 'Backseat Bursting: Pass the Toilet' original [LOLI][WATERSPORTS]
Post by: animewetting on September 04, 2011, 06:56:53 PM
om my goodness this is amazing...might incorporate this idea into one of my stories...i think you should continue it with the mother and maybe some desperate girls who are stuck in the traffic ahead of them.
Title: Re: 'Backseat Bursting: Pass the Toilet' original [LOLI][WATERSPORTS]
Post by: anime lover on September 04, 2011, 07:57:21 PM
I'm glad you liked it, the main reason i didn't include the mother is because I'm more interested in the loli's wetting, plus I think it's more exciting to leave it with a sort of clifhanger ^_^
Title: Re: 'Backseat Bursting: Pass the Toilet' original [LOLI][WATERSPORTS]
Post by: Serika on September 04, 2011, 08:06:44 PM
I liked it too. It's nice to hear about finding relief little by little, and having to ration it out when so many have to pee. :D