... that I probably wouldn't work on another fanfic, but after a good long hiatus, I finally found a little inspiration and I've done a little fic (maybe even started a series, IDK lol).
Here it is: Enjoy!
Tags: Does have Loli, so be careful!
Quote from: Star on December 18, 2008, 09:04:53 PM
Does have Loli, so be careful!
I'm always careful with lolis ^^.
Anyway, a great story, I hope you will return to the world of fanfiction soon!
yeah, great story =p
i havent ever realy read any of your other fanfics but i agree with lisk ^^
If you're writing again this is a good fanfic to come back with. The characters were a little smart for their age, but the dialogue was perfect.
Quotepeepee pee that white stuff
:lol:
Whatever happened to the fic remakes you were doing?
I almost agreed with Serika, but then thought against it. I'm sure there are some very articulate six-year-olds who would talk like that. Whether or not the boy would be aroused by her, that is firmly in the realm of fiction. But it was an excellent story. I guess it was technically loli/shota, but the good kind where it's rooted in curiosity and newness, not the one where it's a young girl who's just as slutty as a pro.
Fantastic job, Star. And that's coming from a self-proclaimed very harsh writing critic. :clap:
Very nice!! First piece I've read by ya but I love it so far...keep it up