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Creative Writing => Fiction => Topic started by: Teumessian on June 02, 2011, 12:30:36 AM

Title: Marching while Desperate (need a bit of input before starting)
Post by: Teumessian on June 02, 2011, 12:30:36 AM
It's been a long time, and I admit I've neglected coming here due to school obligations. But I think it's about time I wrote another story. It's going to be a peek into what I've experienced in a large high school band and color guard ensemble. However, I have an important question before I start. But first, here's the summary:
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Chelsea is a color guard girl in her High School's band and color guard ensemble. They're going to a competition that will hopefully win them the state championships. Unfortunately, even while they're doing some last minute drills before the performance, she realizes that she needs to use the restroom. When the performance is about to start, she is absolutely desperate. The worst part is, the pants she's wearing are light blue, tight, cottony, and will NOT conceal anything.

Can Chelsea hold it, or will she have an accident before the performance is over?

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Does Chelsea have to go #1, or #2? Seriously, I can't decide (I'm not gonna do both, it's too unrealistic).
Title: Re: Marching while Desperate (need a bit of input before starting)
Post by: packrat on June 02, 2011, 04:44:53 PM
I would have to say #1.  I tend to like pee desp better.  While #2 would be equally humiliating, I think fighting the urge to pee would make it seem more obvious, since you could throw in a few crossed legs and a few smashed thighs just to mess up here performance.  That's my opinion.
Title: Re: Marching while Desperate (need a bit of input before starting)
Post by: Facestab Fred on June 07, 2011, 01:50:00 AM
#1. Works best with her clothing and situation (imagine her trying to hold it in with both hands busy, legs in motion, trying to not break formation), plus the last fic you did was #2 already.
Title: Re: Marching while Desperate (need a bit of input before starting)
Post by: Neil on July 11, 2011, 09:13:24 AM
As much as I love #2, I have to agree that #1 works best in this situation. The various ways of trying to hold her pee would not only mess up her formation, but it would also attract the audience's attention. It would be better if the competition is aired live on tv.
Title: Re: Marching while Desperate (need a bit of input before starting)
Post by: Avidreader on July 18, 2011, 07:24:18 PM
You say doing both is unrealistic but I know a chick who did both in her pants on a road trip. And personally I'd say #2 cuz it's my fave unless your planning diareah in which case #1