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Creative Writing => Fiction => Topic started by: The_Enigma on September 03, 2009, 06:54:50 PM

Poll
Question: Would you be interested in reading a story like this?
Option 1: Hell yeah!  Forge ahead as fast as you can!
Option 2: Meh.  Depends on how well it's written, 'cuz I don't have a specific interest
Option 3: Nope.  That just wouldn't appeal to me.
Title: Question
Post by: The_Enigma on September 03, 2009, 06:54:50 PM
I've always had a fantasy deep down inside involving desperation and wetting...

I've always wanted to read a story where a girl is captured by another girl and is bladder tortured/held captive by that girl.  However, the captor has the ability to control minds/extreme hypnosis/something of the like.  Essentially, the captive girl would be tortured/wetting in her mind.

I've searched high and low for a fanfic or story involving that scenario, and any I've found were off a little bit in premise or not up to a good standard.

I'd be willing to write a story such as this, but I was wondering if anyone had an interest in reading it.  (Obviously, I don't want to write a story that no one wants to read)  So please; give your votes, opinions, thoughts, ideas, and general feelings.
Title: Re: Question
Post by: WeAreTheFinale on September 03, 2009, 07:44:24 PM
Sounds like a decent premise. I'd read it. Not sure if I'd like it. It all depends on how well you write it. But I don't want the captor girl to be too over-powered with mind-control-esque powers. Perhaps a certain limit to her abilities?
Title: Re: Question
Post by: animepee on September 03, 2009, 09:13:26 PM
im personally not a fan of torturing fanfics
Title: Re: Question
Post by: JackO on September 04, 2009, 02:21:26 AM
Sounds like it could be pretty amazing, go ahead I say :)
Title: Re: Question
Post by: triforce1996 on September 29, 2009, 12:24:38 AM
Even though I'm not such a fan of torturing, it still depends on how good its written.