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Title: The Cursed Panties [older teens, scat, more inside]
Post by: Serika on August 09, 2012, 09:32:42 PM
Here's a story i have written in response to Facestab Fred's request.

Completed chapters...
  Prologue (Finding the panties)
  Chapter 1: The First Pee (Obvious)
  Chapter 2: Fun With Numbers (Discovering the pee and scat counters, then pooping)
  Chapter 3: Cheaters Never Prosper (Increasing the pee & scat counters by cheating)
  Chapter 4: Diaper Rash (Dealing with the effects of being unable to remove panties)
  Chapter 5: Acceptance (Letting it all go)
  Epilogue (Panties finally leave the MC and find their next victim)

Summary: Karen accidentally puts on some cursed panties and can't remove them. This forces her to wet herself, and eventually crap herself as she searches for a way to remove them.

Contents: Desperation, poop desperation, wetting, panty pooping, farting, and humiliation.
Title: Re: The Cursed Panties [older teens, scat, more inside]
Post by: Facestab Fred on August 12, 2012, 01:25:46 AM
Well, that's about exactly the way I pictured it. You're doing an amazing job, Ser. Keep it up, can't wait for more!

(Seriously, it's almost eerie how exact this is to the way I imagined it.)
Title: Re: The Cursed Panties [older teens, scat, more inside]
Post by: Serika on August 13, 2012, 12:33:44 AM
I'm glad to hear that. Hopefully i'll have the other chapters ready by the end of the month. :)
Title: Re: The Cursed Panties [older teens, scat, more inside]
Post by: Serika on September 03, 2012, 01:12:22 PM
Second half of the story is now done. I'll combine the two htm files later.
Title: Re: The Cursed Panties [older teens, scat, more inside]
Post by: cabbageroll on September 08, 2012, 08:21:46 PM
All I can say is that this was one helluva story, although I wish I had more to say. But great job.  :clap:

Quote"It's over nine thousand!"

     "What?!" shouts Erika. "Nine thousand?!"

That is HANDS DOWN my favorite part of the story (comedy-wise of course). But honestly, you did a really good job on this story.

Title: Re: The Cursed Panties [older teens, scat, more inside]
Post by: Serika on September 09, 2012, 07:35:29 PM
Thanks. Honestly, i was worried that line would just get me a bunch of facepalms. :)
Title: Re: The Cursed Panties [older teens, scat, more inside]
Post by: Facestab Fred on November 08, 2012, 12:12:24 AM
Facepalm schmacepalm, I just read a story where a girl basically crapped herself into oblivion. Great job, I couldn't be happier with the result.